Wednesday, April 8, 2009

thesis statement for essay 3

Thesis statement: As the world advances so does technology, yet as technology advances, citizens of the world are connected even further but their privacy becomes less and less existent. 

sources that would help prove this point would be recent events in general. For example, hacking, and identity theft increases by the day. Millions and millions of people join some kind of networking system every day. Watching the local news, even searching privacy and technology on google gives you a number of articles and news articles that tell you recent events. Indeed technology is a great advancement, but what price does it come to? The price that your privacy, your information is out there for anyone to see. 

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